Tuesday, January 8, 2008

WRITERS' BLOCK 28 THE SEA GATE

THE SEA GATE

 

My love waits for me in the morning

at the Sea Gate by the ocean

for a ship that sailed on the tide.

 

So many mornings, she has waited

scanning the bay

and the ocean wide.

 

She has waited in springs warm morning caress

and winters cold bite

for a ship that will never return.

 

Somehow, I shall come to her,

on a whisper in the wind,

I shall come to her.

 

I shall come to her in the morning

and whisper in her ear,

and play with her hair.

 

For she will know,

that her love

will never return

 

She will wait for me in mourning

at the Sea Gate by the ocean

for a ship lost to the sea.

24 comments:

  1. John, this is such wonderful writing ~ absolutely beautiful !!!
    Beautiful but sad. Great talent and heart here...

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  2. This was so beautiful! I loved it so much, there are no words to express it (look at that, you gave me a bit of writer's block, isn't that ironic) ;-P. Seriously, it's excellent!

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  3. I can see her waiting for her lost love and know he will come to her in the time between sleep and awakening...that space when dreams become real.

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  4. What a stupendous piece of writing. Deeply poignant .... full of yearning and sorrow.

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  5. you my friend are a very talented writer. It struck a note.

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  6. John that was wonderful.. It's a dreary day here, and sometimes a little bit of good writing does wonders.

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  7. I love that he can still come to hear with a whisper in the wind. Nice John really enjoyed it. :)

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  8. I love the way he can still come to her with a whisper in the wind..I enjoyed this John Thank you :)

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  9. nice work mate...collected from beginning to end...no loose ends to wonder about

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  10. This is so moving and beautiful, you always move me with the things you write, John...

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  11. Nicely done. The ship wasn't the Enterprise per chance, was it?

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  12. Though sad very romantic...

    I too have a deep love of the sea

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  13. Very soulful telling of this woeful tale. I very much enjoyed it!

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  14. That was truly beautiful .... the whisper of hope!! ~hug~

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  15. Sad but lovely... she must wait you know.. that is all she has left.

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  16. Amazingly good. For heaven's sake do you ever send your stuff out for publishing?

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  17. doood...sweet azz write guy. ..Sad who cares beautiful words man. Id like to invite you to stop by and read some of mine. I see some similarities poets that tell it like it is. great write Thats Right.jgh

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  18. Pengie four years have nearly passed this last visit of mine...Im glad I got to know you while you were here my friend..miss you, save me a seat, one day we will hang out and recall those days down here

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  19. I remember how this touched me because my husband is a lobster fisherman !!

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