THE SEA GATE
My love waits for me in the morning
at the Sea Gate by the ocean
for a ship that sailed on the tide.
So many mornings, she has waited
scanning the bay
and the ocean wide.
She has waited in springs warm morning caress
and winters cold bite
for a ship that will never return.
Somehow, I shall come to her,
on a whisper in the wind,
I shall come to her.
I shall come to her in the morning
and whisper in her ear,
and play with her hair.
For she will know,
that her love
will never return
She will wait for me in mourning
at the Sea Gate by the ocean
for a ship lost to the sea.
John, this is such wonderful writing ~ absolutely beautiful !!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful but sad. Great talent and heart here...
This was so beautiful! I loved it so much, there are no words to express it (look at that, you gave me a bit of writer's block, isn't that ironic) ;-P. Seriously, it's excellent!
ReplyDeleteI can see her waiting for her lost love and know he will come to her in the time between sleep and awakening...that space when dreams become real.
ReplyDeleteWhat a stupendous piece of writing. Deeply poignant .... full of yearning and sorrow.
ReplyDeleteawwww..that was lovely!
ReplyDeleteyou my friend are a very talented writer. It struck a note.
ReplyDeleteJohn that was wonderful.. It's a dreary day here, and sometimes a little bit of good writing does wonders.
ReplyDeleteI love that he can still come to hear with a whisper in the wind. Nice John really enjoyed it. :)
ReplyDeleteI love the way he can still come to her with a whisper in the wind..I enjoyed this John Thank you :)
ReplyDeletenice work mate...collected from beginning to end...no loose ends to wonder about
ReplyDeleteThis is so moving and beautiful, you always move me with the things you write, John...
ReplyDeleteThis is fabulous.
ReplyDeletesiiigh.. it's beautiful
ReplyDeleteVery nice John and beautiful too!
ReplyDeleteNicely done. The ship wasn't the Enterprise per chance, was it?
ReplyDeleteThough sad very romantic...
ReplyDeleteI too have a deep love of the sea
Very soulful telling of this woeful tale. I very much enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThat was truly beautiful .... the whisper of hope!! ~hug~
ReplyDeleteSad but lovely... she must wait you know.. that is all she has left.
ReplyDeleteAmazingly good. For heaven's sake do you ever send your stuff out for publishing?
ReplyDeletedoood...sweet azz write guy. ..Sad who cares beautiful words man. Id like to invite you to stop by and read some of mine. I see some similarities poets that tell it like it is. great write Thats Right.jgh
ReplyDeletePengie four years have nearly passed this last visit of mine...Im glad I got to know you while you were here my friend..miss you, save me a seat, one day we will hang out and recall those days down here
ReplyDeleteI remember how this touched me because my husband is a lobster fisherman !!
ReplyDeleteShe's still waiting.
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