I am tired,
so very tired
I want to go home.
I want the sweet darkness
to caress me into
that eternal slumber,
to see or perhaps to feel
the pin point of Light
that will blaze into wondrous radiant Glory
I want to go home
I am tired
so very tired.
While they are beautiful words they are .troublesome thoughts.
ReplyDeleteI am not ready to go yet....
(I am not planning on going anywhere soon) :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, John. And I wasn't worried. As your twin, I have a keen sense of your moods, and I know you're all good!
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully said...sometimes I feel that way, but like you dont plan on going anywhere.
ReplyDeleteDr.O you ok?
ReplyDeleteReminds me of a place all my own....
ReplyDeleteVery nice John!
ReplyDeleteSome minutes are like that John....and some aren't.....those are the ones we hold on to just as we hold on to friends.
ReplyDeleteThey are sad beautiful words and all God's people get tired sometimes....
ReplyDeleteI am always sending you hugs but never felt it more than I do with this one (((HUG))) and I am not going to let go easily.
Were you reading my mind today?? LOL It's a beautiful poem - good job.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and a concept that most of us can relate too. Glad you are ok and planning on being around a long long time!!
ReplyDeleteI think we all have thoughts like this at certain moments in our lives.
ReplyDeleteThe picture is beautiful...and I'm sure the brightness we see will be one that will be indescribable...too beautiful beyond words. Hugs, John!!
aww..take some time off to protect your flame...rest and you will come refreshed back. hugs!
ReplyDeletea Beautiful poem and I guess we all feel that way sometime....just take me away to oblivion!!! lol..thanks for sharing....hugs xo
ReplyDeleteIf you didn't feel that away from time to time THEN I would be worried. We all need to take some time off to recharge our batteris. All work and no fun darkens the soul. BTW I loved the poem, very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI LIKE what Amalie said....we all need to remember that advise.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and so much meaning to it.Thank you for sharing
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, sad words. I've had moments where I was so tired, but like you, I'm not going anywhere.
ReplyDeleteWon't it be wonderful when we do..to never feel pain and always be warm and never be tired. :) Did someone stay out too late on New Years Ever. Only kidding..I find humour good medicine for when the soul is distant..Glad to hear you're not going anywhere soon. I get the impression that you are a diabetic because of your feet pain..if I'm wrong let me know..if I'm right my heart is with you..I know how hard it can be at times. Big Hugs.
ReplyDeleteThose are very strong and very sad and perhaps a longing for a better life,,,,,without Pain!,,,but one must get up every morning and say Today I Will make it Better,,,,,,I do and it helps,,,as I have horrendous back pain every day ....and I have sometimes come close to these words, but the Good Lord always takes my hand and leads me to some comfort.......
ReplyDeleteNice -- though not yet ready, can relate completely!
ReplyDeletenice...i am home and still feel tired...what is wrong with me!
ReplyDeleteSad poem, but I can imagine that someone that has reached the end of their life saying these words, perhaps wanting to go and join loved ones that are already there.
ReplyDeletep.s. I love the new background !!!
Sometimes at the end of the silly season we are more exhausted than rested! Sharon has an interesting interpretation!
ReplyDeleteI would also have to agree with Sharon on this background. It is wonderful!
Geez, beautiful poem with very deep meaning to it...you are full of all kinds of surprises! But on the lighterside....if I was in a padded room like YOU, I'd want to go home too and totally hope that sweet darkness would caress me for all I"m worth!!
ReplyDelete(Love the pic, the poem...you're quite the guy.) Dani
Wonderful poem, heavy and yet uplifting.
ReplyDeleteBless you, friend!
I like it and like someone said, a lot of us probably have felt that way. You can't have light without dark.
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