Okay, had to try this so the diety would not be upset with me. Never ever upset a diety. This is my first try at this type.
The challenge this week is to post a Cinquain, a poem composed of five lines. It goes something like this:
Line 1 has one word (the title).
Line 2 has two words that describe the title.
Line 3 has three words that tell the action.
Line 4 has four words that express the feeling,
Line 5 has one word which recalls the title in some way.
HERE?
Here There
Perception shows where
We are. There? Here?
Somewhere?
So much fun thought I would try another:
Waves
Caressing Shoreline
Gently sometimes hard
Always leaving Always taking
Tides.
Come and cinquain with us here, in ----> Poetry Posse Week 24 Challenge
ROFL... Looks like you did it and the diety will not be upset with you now!!!
ReplyDeleteIt doesn't look so easy to do either... very good!!!!
P.S. think that muse is making up for lost time lately!!!!
ReplyDeleteI must say this is not as easy for some of us as it is for others. I liked your John and yes the deity will have to leave you be now.
ReplyDeletei see your normal confusion is still there or is it here..well somewhere...and nope dont tick off the Deity..she will zap yer beak with a lightning bolt...nice job Pengy
ReplyDeleteOH, I LOVE THE SECOND ONE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS SO NICE!!!
ReplyDeleteGosh,that is pretty!
I found out something....
ReplyDeleteme and mandy have a lot in common....
my head doesn't like rules either
WOW johnO.... these poems a re great!!! I loe the second one best.... but the first one's cute! so no need to worry about a diety's ire.. she will be pleased.... she ill definitely be pleased!
ReplyDeleteNicely done, my twin.
ReplyDeletebragger!!!.....lmao....yes that would be my green eyed muse speaking...
ReplyDeletevery well done..
ReplyDelete*Deity bows down before the Ancient Penguin* (Happens only here, so just take it)
ReplyDeleteVery impressive cinquains. See, how easy it is? And you already have the flare for poetry to begin with. I shall send the thunderbolt some other time. ^&^
hey old bird pal came back over to peep the new one..and im glad i did ..
ReplyDeletealways leaving ...always taking
we talking waves or women...ducks a slinks back to the murky swamp
How do you call this kinda poem :
ReplyDeleteRubba dub dub
Thanks for the grub
Yayyyy God!
Spring has sprung
The grass has rizz
I wonder where the birdies is!
Mwwwhat it rhymes !!
(I prefer yours lolol) Good job!
I like the imagery in your Waves ... I can see them coming in and going out ... almost hear them ... the other is very imaginative! Great writes ...thank you for coming by and reading and leaving a comment on mine!!
ReplyDeleteHey John, nice to see you in the peak of your quains. Both are good, but I really do like the second one best. Great write here. 8=)
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
ReplyDeleteNot one, but two...youre firing well, old boy....lol
ReplyDeletePosted....http://lindao6.multiply.com/journal/item/560/POETRY_POSSE_CINQUAIN
ReplyDeleteI like both very much
ReplyDeletehttp://tabbynera.multiply.com/journal/item/978/Poetry_Posse_-_Week_24_Cinquaine
well done old salt : )
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