Sunday, March 22, 2009

POETRY POSSE CINQUAIN

Okay, had to try this so the diety would not be upset with me.  Never ever upset a diety.  This is my first try at this type.

The challenge this week is to post a Cinquain, a poem composed of five lines. It goes something like this:

Line 1 has one word (the title).

Line 2 has two words that describe the title.

Line 3 has three words that tell the action.

Line 4 has four words that express the feeling, 

Line 5 has one word which recalls the title in some way.

HERE?

Here    There

Perception shows where

We are.  There?  Here?

Somewhere?

 

So much fun thought I would try another:

Waves

Caressing Shoreline

Gently sometimes hard

Always leaving  Always taking

Tides.

Come and cinquain with us here, in ----> Poetry Posse Week 24 Challenge

20 comments:

  1. ROFL... Looks like you did it and the diety will not be upset with you now!!!
    It doesn't look so easy to do either... very good!!!!

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  2. P.S. think that muse is making up for lost time lately!!!!

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  3. I must say this is not as easy for some of us as it is for others. I liked your John and yes the deity will have to leave you be now.

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  4. i see your normal confusion is still there or is it here..well somewhere...and nope dont tick off the Deity..she will zap yer beak with a lightning bolt...nice job Pengy

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  5. OH, I LOVE THE SECOND ONE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT IS SO NICE!!!
    Gosh,that is pretty!

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  6. I found out something....

    me and mandy have a lot in common....

    my head doesn't like rules either

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  7. WOW johnO.... these poems a re great!!! I loe the second one best.... but the first one's cute! so no need to worry about a diety's ire.. she will be pleased.... she ill definitely be pleased!

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  8. bragger!!!.....lmao....yes that would be my green eyed muse speaking...

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  9. *Deity bows down before the Ancient Penguin* (Happens only here, so just take it)
    Very impressive cinquains. See, how easy it is? And you already have the flare for poetry to begin with. I shall send the thunderbolt some other time. ^&^

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  10. hey old bird pal came back over to peep the new one..and im glad i did ..

    always leaving ...always taking

    we talking waves or women...ducks a slinks back to the murky swamp

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  11. How do you call this kinda poem :

    Rubba dub dub
    Thanks for the grub
    Yayyyy God!

    Spring has sprung
    The grass has rizz
    I wonder where the birdies is!

    Mwwwhat it rhymes !!

    (I prefer yours lolol) Good job!

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  12. I like the imagery in your Waves ... I can see them coming in and going out ... almost hear them ... the other is very imaginative! Great writes ...thank you for coming by and reading and leaving a comment on mine!!

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  13. Hey John, nice to see you in the peak of your quains. Both are good, but I really do like the second one best. Great write here. 8=)

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  14. Not one, but two...youre firing well, old boy....lol

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