PICTURE TO WORDS 7
Such a place of beauty,
to be such a place of sadness.
The view is beyond description,
like floating above the earth,
Peregrines circling and calling from below.
Close your eyes and you can hear the river flowing.
Hold your arms out, the breeze feels like you are flying.
Look out beyond where the sea greets the river, and you can see the curve of the earth.
Clouds float below, sometimes above, and sometimes will engulf you in their wet embrace.
Lovers come to such places to share enchantment to last a lifetime.
But sometimes late at night, with tourists in the hotels,and locals warm in bed,
or sharing pints and stories at the pub.
Wretched shadows come,
to peer over the edge,
and step off into the darkness.
John this is absolutely beautiful.....
ReplyDeleteVery moving & beautiful
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem - particularly liked the last three lines
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Ohhh this is poignant and beautiful John...
ReplyDeleteIt is beautiful.......I love your writing......and btw Heather is supposed to be in bed sleeping.
ReplyDeleteJeesh..Im leaving the best comments of my life...I swear..Im never sleeping again!!
ReplyDeleteshe now has sleep deprivation delusions of grandeur. She just left this comment. Annie.. U Rawk... I swear she did.....LOL
ReplyDeleteits cheaper than alcohol
ReplyDeleteLOL now John has a couple blog jacked blogs.....he knows how I feel.
ReplyDeleteyou are such a creative devil.... we are all held in awe of your golden words that drip from your mind like diamonds bursting out of the ground in a firecracker cascade. or something like that. I know you are a boobie deamon too!
ReplyDeleteWow, through so many avenues in a few short words, awesome.
ReplyDeleteStriking write...Wish I could see the photo...but my imagination was so vivid with the words expressed here...
ReplyDeleteWow, I love what you did with the picture. "Wretched shadows, ....peer..and step off" along with the part about sadness makes me think of poor sad folks that have reached the end of their ropes....unsettling, but good.
ReplyDeleteWow! This is the first time I have seen you do this I think. It's brilliant and I just love it.
ReplyDeleteVery nice...both enlightening and dark at the same time. Nature is that way sometimes. You've captured it wonderfully.
ReplyDeleteYou are my friend, a great writer !!
ReplyDeletelove it Dr.O
ReplyDeleteso you're a hopeless romantic too! *giggles*
ReplyDeleteThat is really something, the view, the spot. No wonder it's a tourist spot.