Friday, January 30, 2009

CREATIVE CHALLENGE #38 DELICIOUS

DELICIOUS

Delicious was her name,

but she was sour grapes to me

The only thing we had in common,

I was a He and

She was a She.

14 comments:

  1. what's going on here with the grapes? lol cute poem

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  2. well pengy im just glad you finally learned the difference :P

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  3. LOL Pengy, and LOL at Gary too! Now set that to music he he

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  4. Safe to say.... Delicious by any other name would still have thorns?????
    What a mind!!! You know I enjoy how it thinks!!!! Simply stated ~ it speaks volumes!

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  5. wow, not so delicious after all, nice write John

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  6. The whole thing leaves a bad taste and makes you taste the next bite with extreme caution and only after examining everything in detail. But....that sweet perfect taste makes it all worth while....Great job John.

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  7. lmao they could have heard me laughing down the street awesome job!

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  8. Had to love this. Short and sweet.................oh wait that was sour.

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  9. hahahha ... love the humor in this one! A little cynical, too, huh?!

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  10. Lol Sounds like something deeper may be behind this. Cute poem. :)

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