Saturday, October 13, 2007

Writers' Block Challenge #21

Amphibious Assault

The Tide came up that beach
caressing and tumbling
the dead and the dying.

Bloody water and pink foam
churning up the beach
the sand soaking up our blood

That bloody sand
taking so much of us
and wanting more, never satisfied.

That bloody beach
the tide and the sand buried some
before we could get to them

They are out there still
unknown and unseen
under the sand
that bloody sand.

(my first try, thank you for hosting this.)
Mike (a Writers' Block member) reminded me that I should add a short description, Couldn't find them on his page to copy (LOL) , but Honor 74 (also a member) had a very easy link to Writers' Block, which I copied for you, the readers use.
Writer's Block is a weekly event, where a picture is posted as a Challenge, you may submit your thoughts and feelings on the picture, and share them. Thanks for stopping by. The day is yours!

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