Monday, August 17, 2009

RITA'S "RITIN" CHALLENGE #35 A YEAR CAN SEEM SO LONG









A year can seem so long.
Almost a full year,
and he returned to us,.
to the lake and the cabin.
to the place he loves most.
 Especially when the lake misted up
 with early morning ghosts.

Lingering in the quiet,
over his morning coffee,
at the end of the wooden dock.
coffee cup steam mimicking the lake wisps.
The crisp morning quiet was deep,
He so loves those mornings,
surrounded by the deepness of quiet.

We spread his ashes out there
across the lake he loves.
He rests
Embraced in the deep quiet,
cradled in the lake he loves.

12 comments:

  1. Nice one Ducky....nice............................

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  2. A very nice write John and a great place for everlasting peace...

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  3. Pengy this is great. The emotions you evoked in me with this..........they filled my heart. Thanks so much for playing along with us this week. I have to say you guys are all doing Geo's picture justice.

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  4. Love the photo...and a very nice piece of writing Johnoh.

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  5. He's the Pengy... I'm the Duckie...

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  6. A wonderful read... a beautiful place...

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  7. Ouuu wowie... wish my cabin was THAT close to the shore... does make it peaceful indeed. You wrote that? Made me smile.

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  8. beautiful. Words can't describe and yet......... you did:)

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  9. this is beautiful :) i so enjoy the quiet mornings on the lake.

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