For some creative writing exercise please look over Writers' Block. Every other Sunday a picture will be posted, and you have the opportunity to write poetry or prose and share it. Please look here for more information:
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DORIAN HAD A PICTURE
Dorian had a picture
as old as old could be.
All I have is a mirror
with someone staring back at me.
sounds like fun. I am a great poet..cough
ReplyDeleteTo the point..hehehe :)
ReplyDeleteWow John
ReplyDeleteGood humor John...well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem John!
ReplyDeleteAwesome John...((Hugs))
ReplyDeleteReflective!
ReplyDeleteLOL...very clever! I have that mirror too!
ReplyDeleteOh who is Dorian?
ReplyDeleteshort and to the point..(dear dorian gray) I tend to ramble on and on and on...
ReplyDeletegreat post John!
http://aslowread.multiply.com/journal/item/112/Youth_Dew_Writers_Block_Challenge_31
Love the simpilicity of this writing ~ so perfect (And so both you and your mirrow look great! ~ no need to stab the mirror maker !!!)
ReplyDeleteI like what you wrote and I will check it out. Maybe sometime when I am not busy I can join in. Have a great day!
ReplyDeleteAnd Dorian avoided his picture, denied himself, denied time only to have it catch him in the end. Keep looking, that way it can't sneak up on you. Great job.;
ReplyDeleteA man of few words. I like it.
ReplyDeleteNice job young man!
Nice idea!
ReplyDeleteFun poem! I like it.
ReplyDeleteDorian.. nice similarity.. wish I had a picture that aged.... ahhh well.. thanks hon.
ReplyDeleteShort and to the point! Love it.
ReplyDeleteI've done Dorian Gray in #25, so i had to come up with something else... ;)
Yikes! What a pic. Very good writing-again. Dorian Gray is a classic tale and we all have all kinds mirrors we have to look in and see some things we may not always want to see. You say it all in just a few words-which is a hallmark of good writing.
ReplyDeleteJust getting around to checking out this challenges entries. This is a good one, short and sweet ;o)
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