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Thursday, January 15, 2009

CREATIVE CHALLENGE #36 QUIET IS THE NIGHT

So sorry, my Muse turned up, but was only half here, she attends way to many Muse Parties, Gator's Muse has given my Muse some questionable habits. . .I started the challenge with the wrong phrase (the second poem is the first), so I rewrote it (the first poem is the second)  Hope you enjoy, and this all makes sense. . .

Peaceful Is The Night

Peaceful is the night

in curtained mist

Quiet is the night

mist draping into dew

 

Cold is the night

dew gently settling

over comrades and foes alike

in diamond shrouds

 

Peaceful is the night

 Quiet are the nameless

 friends and foes alike

sleeping under diamond shrouds

 

Nameless is the silence

of friends and foes alike

embraced in eternity

in the Quiet of the night.

 

QUIET IS THE NIGHT

Quiet is the night

in curtained mist

Quiet is the night

mist draping into dew

 

Cold is the night

dew gently settling

 over comrades and foes alike

in diamond shrouds

 

Quiet is the night

Quiet are the nameless

the friends and foes alike

sleeping in diamond shrouds

 

Nameless is the silence

of friends and foes alike

embraced in eternity

Peacful is the night.